Responding to Survey Questions

The survey asks about a community or workplace matter and gives you options. This task is not asking what the perfect answer is. It asks you to make a clear choice and persuade a stated reader that it makes sense. The task asks you to make a clear choice, support it with specific details, and suit the stated reader, purpose and points to cover.

Step by step

1. 1

   Find the reader, the purpose and the points to cover

   Before anything else, work out who is running the survey, such as a city office, a residents' group or your employer. Also note what the task tells you to include. The reader sets your tone, and the points to cover become the backbone of your plan. If you skip this, you can write a strong opinion that still misses what was asked.

2. 2

   Choose the option you can support, not the one you feel strongest about

   Take a moment to test each option: which one brings reasons and concrete details to mind fastest? Choose that one, even if your personal view is mixed. The task asks you to choose and explain; it does not ask for your private view. A choice you can support fully is easier to explain clearly and completely than one you struggle to put into words.

3. 3

   Line up a few reasons, each with its own detail

   In your head, or in notes if the test allows them, pair each reason with something concrete. This could be a situation, a person affected, a cost, a time of day or a likely result. Make sure each reason is truly different. If two reasons boil down to the same point, merge them and find a new one. This plan keeps you from making claims you can't support halfway through.

4. 4

   State your choice early and clearly, then build it out

   Open with a sentence that names your choice without hedging, so the reader never has to guess. Give each reason its own stretch of writing, with the detail that proves it, and use linking words that show how the ideas relate: adding, contrasting, giving a cause. Stick with the option you picked from start to finish. If the task asks about the options you did not pick, or if pointing out their weakness helps your case, deal with them briefly and bring the focus back to your choice.

5. 5

   Watch the word count while you draft

   Check the running count now and then, not only at the end. If you are well short with reasons left in your plan, develop the details further. If you are running long, cut your weakest reason rather than rushing through your ending. Whatever is on the screen when the clock stops is what gets submitted, so aim for a complete response of the length the task asks for.

6. 6

   Reread with a short, fixed checklist

   First reread for meaning: is the choice clear, and is every point the task listed covered? Then reread for surface problems: long sentences with no break, the same word repeated too often, and a tone that has become too casual. Fix the biggest problem first. You may not have time for them all.

Using the time

At the start, spend a short, deliberate stretch reading the task, choosing your option and lining up reasons with details. Choosing fast is what saves time here. Spend most of your time writing, and check the word count as you go so length never surprises you. Save a clear slice at the end for rereading. Because the clock never pauses, decide in advance at what point you stop adding new ideas and start checking.

What usually goes wrong

• Sitting on the fence

  Some writers are afraid of picking wrong, so they say every option has merit and never fully commit, or they propose a mix of the options. The survey asked for a choice, so a response that avoids one misses the task. Catch it by asking, after your first sentences, whether a reader could name your choice at once. If not, rewrite that opening before you go on.

  In your feedback: Off prompt

• Reasons with nothing behind them

  A claim such as a change being better for everyone means little on its own. It needs a who, a when or a what-happens to back it up. Watch for sentences that could fit any survey about any topic. When you spot one, add a specific situation or result from the community or workplace in the task.

  In your feedback: No supporting example

• Echoing the option's label over and over

  Writers often repeat the exact name of the option, or a key word from the question, in almost every sentence. Once you have named your choice, refer to it in other ways: describe what it does, who it helps or what it changes. Also look for any one adjective you keep reusing to praise it.

  In your feedback: Repetition

• Chatty tone for a formal reader

  A survey feels casual, but the reader is often an organization, a manager or a council. Slang, jokes and very loose sentences can clash with that reader. Keep the reader in mind as you write, and if a sentence sounds like a text message to a friend, make it plainer and more polite.

  In your feedback: Wrong tone

Checking your own work against what is judged

Content/Coherence

Content/Coherence: Check that your choice is clear early on and that each reason comes with its own concrete detail. Then check that your ideas move in an order a reader can follow without going back to reread.

Vocabulary

Vocabulary: Look for words you repeated, especially the option's name and your main praise word, and see whether some could be replaced with more precise ones. Check that your words fit the topic, such as the right terms for a workplace or neighbourhood matter.

Readability

Readability: Read each long sentence and ask whether it should be split or joined more clearly. Check that your linking words match the relationship between ideas and that you haven't leaned on the same linker again and again.

Task Fulfillment

Task Fulfillment: Tick off each point the task told you to cover and check that your response deals with it. Then confirm that the tone suits the stated reader and that your length falls within the range the task asks for.

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